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:icontaka-laka:
My TinierMe. 彼女はかわいいです。
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Give criticism if you can. ; u; My coloring is terrible, I am trying to get better at it with each drawing. Thank you for taking time to view! I will llama badge you if you end up +fav'ing this and will try to read all comments. This will probably never be popular so I will not have to worry so much haa~ *dreams*

EDIT: I think I fixed the leg. I don't know if it's any better. orz Thanks for the support everyone! And especially the favs and criticism!

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~ShinkuNoFatalism Jun 22, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
aww shes so adorable XD u did great w/ the pose :D
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~General-Krad Jun 22, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So adowable!
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:icondumdodoor:
I like how you drew this picture, the style is pretty nice as well, and... hmmmm... I don't see what I should tell you.

Like that leg, somehow it's... hmmm, well I understand, I had trouble with that too, oh and if you really like to shade a lot, then you could focus on shading some more.
The coloring part is pretty good I'll say, what's wrong having a good red/black/pink combo? I think they fit nicely altogether. :)
So... I guess this concludes my mini mini review, here's a fave from me :+fav: and an advice:

"Keep believing in yourself, keep practicing; keep improving and most importantly... enjoy!"
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:icontaka-laka:
Thanks for the advice! I edited the leg finally =u=; I put it off forever haa~
I appreciate the time you took to help!
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:icondumdodoor:
No problem, this is a tricky one to critique on, I'm glad you took my word for it. :)
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!LolmanArt Jun 21, 2010  Student
I love the oversized hat and the overall drawing. Keep it up!
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Mood: Joy ~AzureInfinity Jun 21, 2010   General Artist
You color nicely, only that you don't shade properly. You do all the shading the skin needs, but you nearly completely forgot the clothing shades. Using more shade, or at least harder shade, might give the picture more depth.
I'd prefer the hair shine to be brighter, thiner, and longer rather than taller [I dunno if you understand this part, I'm not too good at expressing myself XD] But how you do it looks just fine!
...that leg šnš. The lineart is perfect salve that small flaw. You do notice it, right? right were the bend is, the lower part of the leg?

But don't worry 'bout it, the picture is freakkin awesome either way XD
Not shading gives a softer, more 'book' style drawing effect =3
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:icontaka-laka:
Ohh yes, I understand! My next picture I will work harder. This one only took two hours (without shading haaa~;u;). I see the flaw in the leg, too. I may just fix that today and repost it, thank you for pointing it out. I remembering seeing it during the process but completely forgetting about it at the end and leaving it.. m_ _m forgive

Thank you so much for the criticism! It is very well appreciated, and I will do my best to note everything to make it better!
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~AzureInfinity Jun 21, 2010   General Artist
Tis no problem! I love to help! And it is amazing how well the picture looks even with those flaws!
You can come over to mah gallery and poke critisism at my works if you want? Xd My works = fail šoš
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:icontaka-laka:
Leg edited, thanks for pointing it out!
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